25k + synopsis feedback + 1 hour consultation

Need eyes on your story?

If you’ve got a manuscript in progress and want honest, constructive feedback on how it’s working, this service gives you just that—without needing a full edit.

You send in your synopsis and the first 25,000 words. Lani reads everything and gives you detailed notes focused on story structure, character arcs, pacing, and emotional payoff—what’s working, what isn’t, and why.

Then you’ll meet for a one-hour consultation to talk it through, ask questions, and make a plan for what comes next.

This is a great option if you’re not quite ready for a full manuscript critique, but want story-level insight from someone who knows how to find the heart of what you’re writing.