Full developmental edit

Ready for a deep dive?

If you’ve got a full draft and you’re looking for in-depth, story-level feedback, this is the service for you.

You’ll start with a one-hour consultation to talk about your goals for the manuscript—what’s working, what’s not, and where you’d like support.

Then Lani will read the entire manuscript and return it with in-line comments throughout, along with big-picture feedback on structure, pacing, character arcs, emotional impact, and story logic.

Once you’ve had time to sit with the notes, you’ll have a second one-hour consultation to ask questions, talk through revisions, and make a plan for moving forward.

This is a comprehensive story edit designed to help you take your draft to the next level—with encouragement, clarity, and no nonsense.